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Oxygen---NKA

  Author:  42792  Category:(Poetry) Created:(4/15/2002 5:41:00 PM)
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dehydration
sweat pours perfusely out
feel it, can you feel it
breathe deep but the pain...the freakin pain
my chest is caving in
trembling hands dare not attempt
to wipe away all the sweat

I heard it, I know I did
can't you? do you hear what I've said
look at me, I am a total wreck
can't get the cramp out of my neck
left, right
left, right
you see, it's no use
the whole darn situation
it is completely obtuse...
or am I?

Hyper but drowsy
lay my head down to rest
look at me I'm a pathetic mess
breathing...breathing
it only gets worse
is it a sign
an omen, a curse?

where are you, darn it!
I can't catch my breath
getting dizzy now
approaching death
can't take it
I can't take it
no more
Oh God please save me
I just can't take it, please!

P-A-N-I-C ATTACK!

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Date: 4/15/2002 5:47:00 PM  From Authorid: 47038    sorry typo AS inmstead of wat i said
Date: 4/15/2002 5:50:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42792    cool 47038...I don't think its my best either but it was what came to mind, thanks for the honesty! It is appreciated.  
Date: 4/15/2002 6:04:00 PM  From Authorid: 28363    Hehe, please breathe hon, you create your perfection and your pain, release your desires, nature will soothe her child. *hugs*  
Date: 4/15/2002 6:10:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42792    awww Big brother...<<HUGS>> thanks!  
Date: 4/15/2002 6:14:00 PM  From Authorid: 51876    In/Out....In/Out.......Keep Breathing......  
Date: 4/15/2002 6:15:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42792    51876...I'm still breathing...rapidly but still alive,LOL  
Date: 4/15/2002 6:16:00 PM  From Authorid: 20750    whoa!! Wil come back to this!!  
Date: 4/15/2002 6:32:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42792    Thanks for reading Moonie!  
Date: 4/15/2002 9:09:00 PM  From Authorid: 31255    wow, you really grabbed the intense feelings of a panic attack in this one. I have never personally had one but have family members who suffer from panic attacks sometimes and dear god you almost made me feel like I was having one! Great poem NKA!  
Date: 4/16/2002 4:26:00 AM  From Authorid: 47538    WOW NKA you sure capture the moment, it’s like a moving point in everyone's lives, I loved and enjoyed reading it. I am taking a deep breath now……in and out, it feels good…LOL.  
Date: 4/16/2002 4:34:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42792    Toodles and Tori...thanks gals...I don't have them often but when I do they are doozies!  
Date: 4/16/2002 6:33:00 AM  From Authorid: 42703    UH uh another goodie written by a wonder writer.  
Date: 4/16/2002 9:30:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42792    awww little brother, you are just too sweet<<HUGS>> I think you are quite the writer, yourself!  
Date: 7/27/2002 6:29:00 PM  From Authorid: 16376    wow! I really liked this  
Date: 7/27/2002 6:33:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42792    thanks Danielle. It always makes me happy when you reply to my old posts. It brings back memories to me  
Date: 1/3/2004 1:45:00 PM  From Authorid: 21435    Panic attack? Good lord, was I ever in the wrong...hehehe. This was great, NKA. Thanks for that, my friend. *wink*..Write on...  
Date: 1/3/2004 7:04:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42792    Kronk, you were on track, believe me, LOL  

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