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****GHOST BRIDGE Part 5... The Ultimate Ending.....KoRnGURL_18*****

  Author:  28190  Category:(Horror) Created:(3/24/2001 10:42:00 PM)
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May couldn't believe what she was seeing. She felt a strong presence of evil lurking within the room. She heard Thomas call her name, he was back from placing the books in their bedroom. He found her in the hidden library and looked at it in awe. He asked May what the room was and why it was there. That's when may pointed out the Witchcraft books. This terrified him as his blood ran cold.

He walked into the room and glanced around the room; the beautiful furniture was enough to give an eyesore. Where did the witchcraft books come from? Whose where they? This was one thing that was adamant that the two of them find out.

May and Thomas turned to exit the door, when in front of them a figure stood out from the shadows. The darkened silhouette took a step closer and into the lantern's light. An eerie tone rung out among May and Thomas speaking,"What are you two doing in my room?" May and Thomas stood as stiff as two boards on a wooden fence.

May was totally baffled as the shadow stepped closer. It couldn't be, or COULD it? May stared into the man's face in disbelief. "Fa- father?", May asked as she saw the man appear into the dim light.

The man looked at May curiously and spoke, " I did it all for you, May. And you leave me no choice. I have only entered this room in the many years since the plantation has been built; no other soul has ever trespassed. You have disrespected my boundaries and now you both shall pay the penalties- of DEATH!"

May started crying as she screeched, "WHY? Why are you doing this?" Thomas grabbed on May's fragile, shaking arm in hopes to quiet her.

The man, quite shocked at the intensity of May, spoke harshly, "Do you think he would kill you? I left you everything and I can take it all away! Do not test me, child. You have no idea what you are up against!" May and Thomas shrunk back, deeper inside the library, the only exit blocked by the towering, evil man.

"He? You aren'my father? Wh-who are you", asked May, as if she were a small child.

The man, enlightened by their fear and also by her questions spoke with great pride, "Your father wouldn't have ever had the guts to pull off what I have been able to. You see, May, your father never knew about me; for I was cast away by our mother at a young age. I am your father's twin brother Daniel Cray. But when I came to this small town, there was something that people noticed about me. They called me John and spoke to me as if they were my best friends. I enjoyed the attention. The night of your parent's deaths, I enjoyed the best. I went to the barn, grabbed the mallet, and then hit your mother with it. Your father tried to stop me; he was a very stupid man. After your mother was taken care of, I tied him up, as I told him about taking his life away like our mother took mine and I threw him off the bridge. I even took care of the Hendrix'; they were a nice family, which brought forth an insurmountable anger within me. And now I shall take your lives too."

Thomas was highly agitated at the man and said," This is MY family, now. YOU will not take anything from me!" Thomas ran towards Daniel, but didn't even get to lay a blow. Daniel hit him over the head with the bloody mallet, knocking him out cold.

May shivered, for she knew she was next. She begged for him not to hurt her, because she was with child. Daniel lurched forward, as Thomas grabbed his leg, and fell on his face.

"RUN, May! Go!", Thomas shouted at May, in fear for her safety. It took May a few seconds to convince her legs to move. They felt limp and heavy. She finally got them to move and she was in full stride out of the library, knocking over the lanterns, passed through the torture room and out the hidden door. She stopped when she heard Thomas scream. Looking back, she knew he was gone, and she had to save herself.

She saw a bright red glow within the torture room as the flames from the room licked the walls. She knew she had to get out of there or it would be her demise. She ran out of the plantation's front door and stood there staring up at the house covering itself with flames.

Her heart sunk to the bottom of her stomach when she realized that Thomas wasn't coming out. The house has again taken someone away from her, someone she truly loved.

It was then movement came from the front door. It was Thomas. He was badly injured and bleeding but he was going to be okay.

May smiled and tears flooded from her eyes, as Thomas' handsome face came into view. She held him tighter than she had ever held him before. She knew they were finally safe.

May and Thomas moved into the house that Helen built from the inheritance money from May. They lived long and healthy lives happily in the house and had 3 children.

The plantation completely burned down with the exception of a small prayer room in the back of the house and the stone columns, that today still stand.

The end I hope you all liked my story Amanda

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Date: 3/24/2001 10:57:00 PM    Well, maybe I was wrong about the story, but I was almost close when I thought it was her father! It was a great story. More like these please in the future!!!
Date: 3/24/2001 11:01:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 28190    Thanks I am really glad you liked my story and you were close but not on the bull's eye Amanda  
Date: 3/25/2001 2:56:00 AM  From Authorid: 30836    G~Ðøgg: very well done sweetness
Date: 3/25/2001 2:59:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 28190    Thanx G-Dogg. I am glad you liked it  
Date: 3/25/2001 3:14:00 AM  From Authorid: 30229    YAYYYYYYYY Amanda!!! Great ending for a GREAT story!!! Thanks for sharing. ***Gail***  
Date: 3/25/2001 4:43:00 AM  From Authorid: 9875    WRITE ON!!LOL, lightning_girl
  
Date: 3/25/2001 4:43:00 AM  From Authorid: 9875    planning to write another one, or no?  
Date: 3/25/2001 3:52:00 PM    Wow....What an ending! Great Story korngurl! Rachel
Date: 3/25/2001 4:03:00 PM    OH MAN! THAT Was TOTALLY RAD! I LOVE IT! tAyLoR
Date: 3/25/2001 6:06:00 PM    thats a great ending manda...only thing i dont like is the misrepresentation of witchcraft in the story. because witchcraft is always associated with evil but in reality it is a very positive craft and the main rule of witchcraft for most witches is to never do any witchcraft that harms another human being, and dont even do it without the permission of the people involved in the spell. but it was still a great story, i enjoyed reading it. bye manda love you! -suzie
Date: 3/25/2001 6:11:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 28190    Mainly.... i should have wrote this in the story that it was about black magic more than witchcraft, but i never said that it was ever used in either a positive or negative way I just mentioned it Amanda  
Date: 3/25/2001 8:45:00 PM  From Authorid: 30986    you really are talented sis, can't wait to read another one of your stories.... See ya!!! kysta  
Date: 3/29/2001 6:13:00 PM    amanda i really liked your story but it is kinda hard to me to belive it like how did you get the infurmation but i still think that you should right a book Love allways Billijean
Date: 3/29/2001 9:39:00 PM    that's definitely an great end to a great story, excellent job!!! ~Adam~
Date: 3/30/2001 8:44:00 PM  From Authorid: 18231    Amanda...this was an EXCELLENT story!! I'll hope that you'll write more like this one soon!!!  
Date: 3/30/2001 8:44:00 PM  From Authorid: 18231    Amanda...this was an EXCELLENT story!! I'll hope that you'll write more like this one soon!!!  
Date: 3/31/2001 9:25:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 28190    Thank you everyone! I really appreciate the replies from you all. I am so HAPPY you all enjoyed it as well Have a good day! Amanda a.k.a KoRnGURL_18  
Date: 4/11/2001 12:52:00 AM    Hey Amanda!!!!!!!! These stories were absolutely awesome!!!!! I like read the first one and then I had to read them all straight away. Well done girl!!!!!!! You better continue to write more and more and more and keep me posted please

Huge hugs,

Shona
Date: 4/11/2001 7:16:00 AM  From Authorid: 2420    wow, great story  
Date: 5/10/2001 6:31:00 AM  From Authorid: 21155    I loved the entire story Amanda.....It was full of all the things that captivate me..horror, intrique, mayhem, ghosts, witchcraft, history, and even had romance. Awesome post! Much love, hugs, and kisses. -KQ a.k.a.  
Date: 3/31/2002 10:20:00 PM  From Authorid: 49789    yikees, i would never ever go near that place, ever lol. but this was so awesome, thanks alot for posting it i really enjoyed reading it. CinnamonRain  
Date: 5/8/2002 6:26:00 PM  From Authorid: 1432    Ohhh the peices come together.. I liked it.. great story!! ..  
Date: 5/22/2002 9:42:00 PM  From Authorid: 37981    AWESOME!!!!  
Date: 5/26/2002 11:55:00 AM  From Authorid: 18870    wooohoo they made it out and they both are happy now...and that was one creepy story...*shudders*  
Date: 5/26/2002 3:10:00 PM  From Authorid: 21435    I loved your story Amanda. I couldn't stop reading. Sometimes things from the past are the most remarkable. What a good idea to come and read these "first posts." Thanks again and Write on.....  
Date: 8/12/2002 8:25:00 PM  From Authorid: 16845    amanda I tell you WRITE more hehe  
Date: 3/8/2004 5:49:00 AM  From Authorid: 53155    awesome storie, i loved it.  
Date: 11/23/2004 9:03:00 PM  From Authorid: 62915    WOW! What an awesome conclusion awesome writing! I enjoyed reading this so much Very talnted you are Ghost-CHick  
Date: 11/5/2006 11:49:00 AM  From Authorid: 61901    Hey Amanda, this was truly a great ghost story and I love the ending.... Makes me want to visit that prayer room. Sure this is fiction? LOL great writing and your talent really shows in this story. Blessed Be.  
Date: 11/5/2006 12:51:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 28190    Aww, thanks Ranger... I write a lot actually, just cant post most the material I do write. xD Also thanks everyone else, sorry I never got back to ya'll to say thanks *hugs*  
Date: 4/22/2007 10:59:00 AM  From Authorid: 63575    That was a terrific story, thank you so very much for the read!  

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